intermittently
I saw you
during those years
when they said
you were crazy unwell
now
too late
you are dead gone
© Dawn Whitehand 2013
intermittently
I saw you
during those years
when they said
you were crazy unwell
now
too late
you are dead gone
© Dawn Whitehand 2013
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I Love the artwork. At first it looks scribbley (I make my own words sometimes . . .). And then the more you look, the more you see.
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Thanks Donna…. I guess that is the nature of abstract drawings 🙂
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The art looked like a tornado to me. But I’m from Oklahoma.
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Now that you mention it, it does look a bit tornado-like 🙂 Thanks for visiting…
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the
wind whispers
sss
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wise words 🙂
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Love…burnt
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thanks Hamid 🙂
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I enjoyed your words and suspect they represent
the dissonance felt;
experienced by the writer who may have done more;
or kept in touch;
but did not. Beautiful art.
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thanks so much for your beautiful words Michael 🙂
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I think the poem and the art together is fantastic. The coloures remind me of a late summer sun setting against a fading day. And the black squiggles are like – a thought – a life expiring. As a writer of poetry I am going to try it out.
Thank you Dawn
hillgem.
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great interpretation, thanks Gemma and good luck 🙂
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